Editing / rewriting for clarification, one page only

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Job Description


I need the page to which this link leads (the About page of LoveMe.eu) to be edited and rewritten for clarification.


I am not talking about a change of format nor style - the system writings on the site have a certain style and this page needs to be within that style - but I need it edited and perchance partially rewritten to ensure that the information presented is as clear as possible to the new visitor.

Again, this is the page http://loveme.eu/blog/About_LoveMeeu_1_3586.

Please read it thoroughly, and also the attached pages (in paging, also in right column) to ensure that you understand what the site is about.

Following that read, please ponder what might be missing from the About page, or how something should be said differently or added to make it clearer.

Ideally the word count should not increase, it's already pretty long.

I need this done today, preferrably, and the project fee reflects that rush.