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The following document is an app description that will appear in the appstore for a potty training app (www.pottytrainingapp.com )

- we have written it, following some guidance from here:
http://momswithapps.com/2011/04/18/writing-an-itunes-app-description/

-but we are not native, copyright experts or writters! so we need a very good andcreative writter, that edit our document following the instructions we highlighted in the link. ( what it is, how does it help, who it is for, why should i care, where do i press...)

- we dont want to say negative things, we want to show positive things that can be achieved with this app...so we want to reinforce positive atitudes in all document----this is thinking in marketing point of view!!!




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The interactive potty training book for children that will turn frustration into fun and set the mood for potty training! - Brilliant!

"Potty Training-Learning with the animals" is a perfect for toilette training time with sweet music, elegant narration and stunning 2D interactive illustration that will delight both parents and children. It allows children from 1 to 5 years old to take an active role in taking the animals, and children to the potty; thus getting themselves ready for their own potty time … fantastic!

Embarking on the potty train is a profound stressor to any parent, and any child. We understand that teaching little one’s how to potty is a sensitive issue fraught with emotion, hope and fear. That’s why we developed this wonderful tool that will alleviate some of the strain from the classic potty training!

HOW WILL THIS APP HELP YOU?

-1. It will set the mood for potty training! (the most important part in potty training): All around the farm the animals are interested to go to the potty, the animals make those funny potty dancing movements and even feel butterfly's in their stomach. Small children have the task to take the animals to the potty ! Watching all the animals go to the potty is a lovely way to set the mood for potty training.


2. Turn Frustrating into fun! : You've conquered so many challenges in your parenting life, but there is still a bit of unfinished business that can bring you and your toddler to tears. Potty training the animals!! Luckily, there's an app for that—turn frustrating into fun with these potty training app.

3. kids love this app, the animals and the story!:
Ever wonder why children are so drawn to animals? Everyone has long been aware of this fascinating attraction. So why not take this advantage while you potty train your kid?
Children oftern learn BEST by seeing and doing, so why not take this fascinating attraction from animals to motivate and interest children to potty train!!

Highlights: Potty Training the animals
✓ Stunning designs.
✓ 2D illustration and animation
✓ 5 interactive animals (Dog, Cat, Dog, Chicken, Lion)
✓ 1 interactive boy and 1 interactive girl.
✓ Accompanied by melodic lullaby music
✓ Elegant voice narrating the story.

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Skills: training, teaching, marketing

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