VSL Critique

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Job Description

Looking for a copywriter to critique my VSL. Its 30 minutes long.

I would like some feedback on whether I am hitting the right points and if my copy is convincing enough. I want you to be PAINFULLY HONEST!

Looking to get some pointers on how I can improve my copy as I am trying to learn the black art of copywriting. I've tried to ask for help several times on forums and no one comes forward to help me out so I would like to pay someone for their time on good ol odesk..

Thanks!